Editing for Medical Blog

As an example of my editing abilities, I’ve included an original blog published by Neuralink. I took on the task of reducing the word count by 50% while maintaining the messaging behind the piece. Further editing decisions were made regarding word choice, grammar, and formatting.

Original Blog Text

EDited Blog Text

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